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Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?
It has recently been proposed that news is irrelevant to people’s life and thus, there is no utility to be gained from reading newspapers or watching television news programs. This essay completely disagrees with this idea on the ground that news can be a valuable source of cautionary messages and it can also enhance the quality of one’s social life.
People can learn what to do and what not to do by reading news. The reason is that the news frequently broadcast wrongdoings that are condemned by society as a whole, as well as the consequences that the perpetrators have to face as a result of their actions. People who follow the news, therefore, can become more aware of the wrongful acts and become less inclined to commit them. For example, the incessant broadcast of the legal and professional repercussions that protestors participating in the violent demonstration in Capitol Hill in the United States may have to face undoubtedly deters potential protestors who try to incite violence in the future. Should people gain foresight about the consequences of unlawful activities through the news, they will be less likely to commit them, which is conducive to a safer society.
Moreover, staying up to date with the news can also enhance people’s social lives. In other words, constantly being updated on popular events through the news, many people will have endless conversation topics to discuss with others and thus, they will become good company and their social circles can be easily expanded. Furthermore, reading news also helps develop people’s critical thinking, as they are exposed to different viewpoints of the same event, which is not only advantageous in their social lives but also in their professional lives as well.
In conclusion, I believe the claim that news is useless is short-sighted because the benefits of reading news are manifold, ranging from helping people fine-tune their moral compasses to improving their social lives.
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- Cách trả lời đạt điểm cao Speaking theo chủ đề HISTORICAL EVENTS (Sự kiện lịch sử) nha.
Part 1: Do you like to learn about history? (Bạn có thích học lịch sử không?)
(Answer) Wow, I am into reading history, not only of our country, Vietnam but also other countries in the world. (Reason) History is not only a subject to me, it is also a source of invaluable information about our origin as well as the victorious past of our ancestors.
Part 2: Describe a historical event that you like the most. (Mô tả mọt sự kiện lịch sử mà bạn thích nhất)
(Answer) Honestly speaking, everytime I am asked about history, I am always eager to talk about Vietnam war, which ends in 1975 and one of the historical highlights of our country. Vietnam undergone hundreds of years under the colonization of foreign invaders and this is the last war before a new era of peace and independence is opened for us.
(Reason) It is an unforgettable period of history for some reasons. Firstly, it is the courageous fighting spirit of Vietnamese people. (Example) Our country was divided into Nothern part and Southern part. Communication was almost impossible at that time and people across the country were living in poverty and destitute conditions. However, our soldiers still fought bravely with the support from ordinary people.
(Reason) Secondly, this is remarkable because hardly anyone could think that we could win the war. (Example) When compared to such a well-armed country like America, it was hard to think that we could defeat them. However, with the determination of the whole nation, we have our own peace. April 30th, 1975 was the date that we gained independence from the invaders and from then on, we have held annual celebration to pay tribute to those who sacrificed for the country. I hope that Vietnamese people will never forget this important event of the nation.
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😲EATING CARBS WILL KILL YOU?🤔
💥There’s been lots of sensational headlines around a new study that was released this week 😱 So we thought we’d do a quick summary.
🔎For a more thorough breakdown we’d recommend the reviews by Dr Joanna McMillan & Nutrition Wonk (linked below)
⭐️WHAT WAS THE STUDY?⭐️
🔬The research (called the PURE study), looked at the diets of 135,335 people in 18 countries in Asia, Africa, Europe and America.
🍏Researchers looked at what people ate & followed them for ~7 years. They recorded who died (& why), as well as who had a cardiovascular event (like a heart attack/stroke).
❤️They then used their data on peoples diets to find out if there was any link between the % of macronutrients (carbs, fats, proteins) people ate & their risk of dying from heart disease/having a cardiovascular event.
⭐️WHAT DID THEY FIND?⭐️
🍚They found that the people who ate the most carbs (~77% of their diet) had a 28% higher risk of death (from all causes, but not from heart disease).
🥑They also found that the people who ate the most fat (~35% of their diets) had a 23% lower risk of death than people who ate the least fat (~10%).
🍖The type of fat people ate didn’t make a difference to the risk of heart disease or cardio events.
🍗 Low intakes of saturated fat were associated with a higher risk of stroke.
⭐️SOO CARBS ARE BAD AND FATS ARE GOOD?⭐️
✋️Not so fast! There’s a few things in this study which aren’t immediately obvious from the headlines:
1. It was an observational study - this means it can show links and patterns but not cause & effect.
2. The people who ate less than 60% of energy from carbohydrate weren’t at an increased risk of death, this association was only seen at VERY HIGH intakes of carbohydrates, not moderate intakes, as seen in the UK.
3. This study is done predominantly in low & middle income countries and the results may be clouded by poverty. For example, protein & fat in poor countries are usually more expensive than carbs. This means that people who are poorer are likely to eat a lot more carbs and not through choice. Poverty also usually means poorer access to/adequacy of healthcare and diets which don’t meet energy and nutrient requirements. It’s hard to tease this relationship out and so it could affect the results.
4. The high fat diet wasn’t really high fat. In fact the highest fat group ate ~35% fat, which is similar to current UK recommended amounts. The effects at higher intakes of fats weren’t included in the study.
5. This study only looked at different types of fat and not different types of carbohydrate, the predominant source of carbs in Asia being refined white rice, for example.
⭐️WHAT DOES THIS STUDY TELL US?⭐️
👍Overall, this study is an interesting addition to the body of research on fats and carbohydrates.
⚖️Its findings are in line with other research that has indicated that we shouldn’t be afraid of eating a moderate amount of fat (a la med diet), and that we shouldn’t be replacing fats with carbohydrates in our diets.
🤓However, unlike the headlines suggest, it’s not an indication that all carbs are “bad” for us, or a green light to eat bucket loads of fat. It simply supports the notion that diets with moderate amounts of good quality carbs and fats can be healthy.
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